Holy Shit that blew my mind! Instant 5 Stars!
First, I gotta say, nice new dialogue approach, the mouth movements are certainly better, plus the fluidity and transition between each stance is amazing. I think you've finally perfected that little area.
Well, Demonlord was short-lived as a hacker in the original, makes sense to keep it that way. Ravenfreak somehow comes off as sort of a drama queen to me, but hey, face is important. Also, nice little tidbits with the "warning" when Saturndiva attacked Flamey, and the PM too. You're really starting to shape this world into something.
Nylocke is just as hilarious as always, and moreso when others are brought into the fray, with his talk with Alpha and fight with Demonlord, which, by the way, had me laughing when they achieved victory. I bet that hurt!
All in all, you're improving as you go, and that's the best anyone can do! 5 All around and favorited!